Saturday, June 03, 2006

Its lone, quiet and serene...

The door lies closed
the rooms empty, a void

The voice of the silence,
the ticking of the clock

The noise of the fan
and the pages that fly

The melody of rain drops,
the hustling of the wind

The lamp's illuminance,
the shadow on the wall

The beats of my heart,
the avalanche of thoughts

Its lone, quiet and serene...

15 Comments:

Blogger aparna said...

Alone-ness is sometimes serene and essential, isn't it?

Nice. :)

8:01 PM, June 03, 2006  
Blogger Vikas said...

beautiful!!

and yes, sometimes being alone is essential..getting used to being alone is not!

8:50 PM, June 03, 2006  
Blogger purvins said...

are 3 ghante..akele kya rahi...tune to poem likh de!!

9:01 PM, June 03, 2006  
Blogger purvins said...

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9:01 PM, June 03, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@aparna: Enjoy every bit of it... its essential truly!

@vikas: Love the being alone sometimes, got to live it after long... blessing in disguise!

@purvins: It didnt have to b 3 hrs. , a few minutes of peace & it all feels nice :-)

10:09 PM, June 03, 2006  
Blogger Vivek said...

nice one :)

2:35 AM, June 04, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@vivek: Thaang Yoo! :-)

7:42 PM, June 04, 2006  
Anonymous Shubh said...

Good one

9:43 PM, June 04, 2006  
Blogger Ameen Budhwani said...

At times when you are alone you should try to search for your inner happiness and the light with you which enlightens and purifies your mind...
Thats what I try to do...
Nice one again Sal :)

10:55 PM, June 04, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@shubh: Thanx :)

@ameen budhwani: Yup, being lone is sometimes blissful... Love how it feels :) Completely agree with the 'introspection of good' part.

1:03 AM, June 05, 2006  
Blogger Chintan said...

nice one.

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just being a devil's advocate here but if there is "noise" of the fan, "melody" of the rain drops & other random sounds, how come there is so much quietude? :P ... lol

sal maregi mijhe!!

8:51 AM, June 05, 2006  
Blogger Praveer said...

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7:55 AM, June 06, 2006  
Blogger Praveer said...

How lucky can some get! Peace and quiet...would do anything to have some of it.

...ain't a bad time to do some studying also ;-)

7:56 AM, June 06, 2006  
Blogger Harsha said...

Nice...

9:58 AM, June 11, 2006  
Blogger Advocatus Diaboli said...

nice poem, nice blog ( but its a bit too dark in here )

5:45 AM, June 14, 2006  

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