Beauty
~ Saloni (Rhode Island)I lay there gazing into the air
the fervor around was indeed rare
The breeze sang his melody
colors enchant, in rhapsody
She met him, like n'ver before
together beautiful, I adore
The sound of her splashes, they anlage
she exhibits her beauty, says I'll manage
He shows off the hot hues
she gets the hint, appreciates the blues
Attracted both, decide to unite
oneness disappeared in the night
I continue to ogle the embracing beauty
O'lord! its the magic of the gaiety
the fervor around was indeed rare
The breeze sang his melody
colors enchant, in rhapsody
She met him, like n'ver before
together beautiful, I adore
The sound of her splashes, they anlage
she exhibits her beauty, says I'll manage
He shows off the hot hues
she gets the hint, appreciates the blues
Attracted both, decide to unite
oneness disappeared in the night
I continue to ogle the embracing beauty
O'lord! its the magic of the gaiety
posted by SAL at 3/07/2006 10:29:00 PM
15 Comments:
day, water, sun, moon, night - do not need to purchase these things with money, for everything else use mastercard :), thats the beauty of nature!
did you take that picture?...its awesome..
nice pic....and a nicer poem out of it :)
sky is also orange...like our tees on orkut ;)
@mtalpz: nice one :)
@Ashish: Yup its by me, Thanx :-)
@Sumedh: Saale, ab tak orange t-shirt wala pic acha nahi lagta tha, aaj se acha lagne lag gaya... not fair!
Btw, who said the poem was out of it ;) Pictures can b deceiving buddy :P
tht was a diff pic...wasnt it??
neways...no more Orange comments. now, only BPL or TATA Indicom :o))
and wht rubbish, the poem is not based on tht pic...
damn!!!
fir bahut hi-fi hain, nahi jhepega.
You sure rock gurl...very nice ....and liked the picture...are you a camera fan too????????
Music enchanting, lights galore
He waits for her on the shore
From dawn to dusk, the wait was long
She never came, he was wrong
Ship leaves, all shall part
Heart bleeding, he shall depart
Lights gone, music silenced
Comes the storm, winds torment
Journey ruined, ship wrecked
He lays on the deck, motionless!
New journey he would begin alone
Never wished she could come along
Asks the Lord, one last sight
Wished she could just love him for a night!
nice pic !!!
Poetry-voetry ... samajhta nahi hai !
@green eyed goblin : Thanx :) Yup enjoy photography too :)
@anonymous: U r indeed a wonderful poet/poetess
@soo-beer: Thanx ;)
i had an exactly similar pic of th e sunset at Vrindavan gardens...but this ones better.
@Siddharth Adelkar: The scenario was too blissful
@sal: Thanx. Love makes everyone a poet, I am amateur at best. I am impressed by your writing too. Keep up the good work.
You are a great artist .. even the colour of the text matches the pic. Poetry, picture and colours makes a complete package .. makes one feel he's right there .. good one :)
@Vivek: Thanx for the compliment :)I'am flattered!
(Complete package: seems like u r talking in the language of Java ;))
@Sumedh: Was kidding. U were right, it indeed is abt the pic
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