Tuesday, March 07, 2006


~ Saloni (Rhode Island)
I lay there gazing into the air
the fervor around was indeed rare

The breeze sang his melody
colors enchant, in rhapsody

She met him, like n'ver before
together beautiful, I adore

The sound of her splashes, they anlage
she exhibits her beauty, says I'll manage

He shows off the hot hues
she gets the hint, appreciates the blues

Attracted both, decide to unite
oneness disappeared in the night

I continue to ogle the embracing beauty
O'lord! its the magic of the gaiety


Blogger mtalpz said...

day, water, sun, moon, night - do not need to purchase these things with money, for everything else use mastercard :), thats the beauty of nature!

6:01 AM, March 08, 2006  
Anonymous ashish said...

did you take that picture?...its awesome..

7:54 AM, March 08, 2006  
Blogger SumEDh said...

nice pic....and a nicer poem out of it :)

sky is also orange...like our tees on orkut ;)

8:15 AM, March 08, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@mtalpz: nice one :)

@Ashish: Yup its by me, Thanx :-)

@Sumedh: Saale, ab tak orange t-shirt wala pic acha nahi lagta tha, aaj se acha lagne lag gaya... not fair!
Btw, who said the poem was out of it ;) Pictures can b deceiving buddy :P

10:53 AM, March 08, 2006  
Blogger SumEDh said...

tht was a diff pic...wasnt it??
neways...no more Orange comments. now, only BPL or TATA Indicom :o))

and wht rubbish, the poem is not based on tht pic...

fir bahut hi-fi hain, nahi jhepega.

11:01 AM, March 08, 2006  
Blogger green-eyed goblin said...

You sure rock gurl...very nice ....and liked the picture...are you a camera fan too????????

11:34 AM, March 08, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Music enchanting, lights galore
He waits for her on the shore

From dawn to dusk, the wait was long
She never came, he was wrong

Ship leaves, all shall part
Heart bleeding, he shall depart

Lights gone, music silenced
Comes the storm, winds torment

Journey ruined, ship wrecked
He lays on the deck, motionless!

New journey he would begin alone
Never wished she could come along

Asks the Lord, one last sight
Wished she could just love him for a night!

12:20 PM, March 08, 2006  
Blogger SOO-BEER said...

nice pic !!!
Poetry-voetry ... samajhta nahi hai !

1:09 PM, March 08, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@green eyed goblin : Thanx :) Yup enjoy photography too :)

@anonymous: U r indeed a wonderful poet/poetess

@soo-beer: Thanx ;)

1:11 PM, March 08, 2006  
Blogger Siddharth Adelkar said...

i had an exactly similar pic of th e sunset at Vrindavan gardens...but this ones better.

2:18 PM, March 08, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Siddharth Adelkar: The scenario was too blissful

5:44 PM, March 08, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

@sal: Thanx. Love makes everyone a poet, I am amateur at best. I am impressed by your writing too. Keep up the good work.

9:27 PM, March 08, 2006  
Blogger Vivek said...

You are a great artist .. even the colour of the text matches the pic. Poetry, picture and colours makes a complete package .. makes one feel he's right there .. good one :)

11:39 PM, March 09, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Vivek: Thanx for the compliment :)I'am flattered!
(Complete package: seems like u r talking in the language of Java ;))

8:36 AM, March 10, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Sumedh: Was kidding. U were right, it indeed is abt the pic

9:19 AM, March 10, 2006  

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