Wednesday, March 15, 2006

He walks besides me...

Hes the only one that walks besides me
How much ever I try to avoid him

To start the day, he starts getting close
With him around I feel safe, protected

The try to take him in my arms
Some shy, some sustain, some fail

The day passed by, he got closer
Now I was scared, its getting crazy

I cant play safe, cant get away
I know it wont last too long

We held each other, until sun to west
Now distance did increase, grew longer

He stands there, a dark handsome man
He gazing at me, me starring at him

I turn around, feels like someones watching
No its just my apprehension

I can make him do things my way
And I swear to god, he wont deny

The more I try to get away from him
Theres not a day he doesnt follow

Silly of me to think that way
How can I forget, afterall hes mine

(This time I tried my hand at free verse)

21 Comments:

Blogger kavin said...

Good poem for a thing that is only urs and will alws be with u...

10:00 PM, March 15, 2006  
Blogger meenakshi said...

you see him when its day
but if the stars are bright
and there's a balance of light
at night, you'll see him sway

your folks may depart
as they please
your emotions too may one day cease
but he'll stay, he who is your part.

10:04 PM, March 15, 2006  
Blogger Vivek said...

Not to forget someone who brings you your friend - everyday

11:49 PM, March 15, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@kavin, @Meenakshi, @Vivek : Very true :)

12:39 AM, March 16, 2006  
Blogger shreya said...

SAL: Thanks for the compliments. Bold I may be, but far from great, I am quite sure! Thanks anyways...

7:35 AM, March 16, 2006  
Blogger SumEDh said...

"I can make him do things my way"

is this inspired frm tht link??? :)

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for once I got this one right...
its the shadow thats beside u, when u r in the light!!!

10:28 AM, March 16, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Sumedh: That link was looked up by a friend after he read my post. He then send it ;)

10:39 AM, March 16, 2006  
Blogger SumEDh said...

o man... i am on a roll today... guessed one correctly...and almost hit the 2nd one on-spot.

11:18 AM, March 16, 2006  
Blogger Kaushal said...

nothing to comment..;)

9:01 PM, March 16, 2006  
Blogger Rêves said...

nice one sal..i really like free verse...

11:53 PM, March 16, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@kaushal: ;)

@Rêves: Thanx :) I'll surely let u know wen I write the next one ;)

12:24 AM, March 17, 2006  
Anonymous pauravi said...

mom & dad
Tomor when the time comes the poem wil l come true in yr real life where this SHADOW 'll be replaced by yr WORST HALF
where in it 'll be u who 'll be shocked .& v 'll be onlooker

8:33 PM, March 17, 2006  
Blogger Ameen Budhwani said...

Another good post Sal...u r having a gr8 series of posts in the last month...really some gr8 ones...

10:29 PM, March 17, 2006  
Blogger Vikas said...

simple but written effectively !

bumbed into your blog from Orkut.. and after reading something nice, I do feel like commenting :)

5:53 AM, March 18, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Mom-Dad: I know u'll come on a killing wen I give u the shock ;)

@ameen: Thanx :)

@Vikas: Thanx :) Visited ur photo-a-day blog, its splendid!

12:18 PM, March 18, 2006  
Blogger s! said...

very well written, good work! :-)

3:59 PM, March 18, 2006  
Blogger Vikas said...

I saw you did and thanks for all the wonderful comments Saloni!!

8:08 PM, March 18, 2006  
Anonymous ss said...

lovely!!

10:55 PM, March 18, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@s!, @ss: Thanx :)

@Vikas: U r welcome

2:10 AM, March 19, 2006  
Blogger Vivek said...

simple.... but unsatisfactory I think!

5:52 AM, March 20, 2006  
Blogger Jay said...

Very nice poem...one of the few jo samaz mein aai mujhe :-P

8:31 PM, March 21, 2006  

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