He walks besides me...
Hes the only one that walks besides me
How much ever I try to avoid him
To start the day, he starts getting close
With him around I feel safe, protected
The try to take him in my arms
Some shy, some sustain, some fail
The day passed by, he got closer
Now I was scared, its getting crazy
I cant play safe, cant get away
I know it wont last too long
We held each other, until sun to west
Now distance did increase, grew longer
He stands there, a dark handsome man
He gazing at me, me starring at him
I turn around, feels like someones watching
No its just my apprehension
I can make him do things my way
And I swear to god, he wont deny
The more I try to get away from him
Theres not a day he doesnt follow
Silly of me to think that way
How can I forget, afterall hes mine
(This time I tried my hand at free verse)
How much ever I try to avoid him
To start the day, he starts getting close
With him around I feel safe, protected
The try to take him in my arms
Some shy, some sustain, some fail
The day passed by, he got closer
Now I was scared, its getting crazy
I cant play safe, cant get away
I know it wont last too long
We held each other, until sun to west
Now distance did increase, grew longer
He stands there, a dark handsome man
He gazing at me, me starring at him
I turn around, feels like someones watching
No its just my apprehension
I can make him do things my way
And I swear to god, he wont deny
The more I try to get away from him
Theres not a day he doesnt follow
Silly of me to think that way
How can I forget, afterall hes mine
(This time I tried my hand at free verse)
posted by SAL at 3/15/2006 09:33:00 PM
19 Comments:
you see him when its day
but if the stars are bright
and there's a balance of light
at night, you'll see him sway
your folks may depart
as they please
your emotions too may one day cease
but he'll stay, he who is your part.
Not to forget someone who brings you your friend - everyday
@kavin, @Meenakshi, @Vivek : Very true :)
SAL: Thanks for the compliments. Bold I may be, but far from great, I am quite sure! Thanks anyways...
"I can make him do things my way"
is this inspired frm tht link??? :)
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for once I got this one right...
its the shadow thats beside u, when u r in the light!!!
@Sumedh: That link was looked up by a friend after he read my post. He then send it ;)
o man... i am on a roll today... guessed one correctly...and almost hit the 2nd one on-spot.
nothing to comment..;)
nice one sal..i really like free verse...
@kaushal: ;)
@Rêves: Thanx :) I'll surely let u know wen I write the next one ;)
mom & dad
Tomor when the time comes the poem wil l come true in yr real life where this SHADOW 'll be replaced by yr WORST HALF
where in it 'll be u who 'll be shocked .& v 'll be onlooker
Another good post Sal...u r having a gr8 series of posts in the last month...really some gr8 ones...
simple but written effectively !
bumbed into your blog from Orkut.. and after reading something nice, I do feel like commenting :)
@Mom-Dad: I know u'll come on a killing wen I give u the shock ;)
@ameen: Thanx :)
@Vikas: Thanx :) Visited ur photo-a-day blog, its splendid!
very well written, good work! :-)
I saw you did and thanks for all the wonderful comments Saloni!!
lovely!!
@s!, @ss: Thanx :)
@Vikas: U r welcome
simple.... but unsatisfactory I think!
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