Wednesday, March 22, 2006

muskura do mere liye...

Dono taraf hai aag lagi hui, na sambhale yeh dil
tum bhi ho gumsum, tanhaayee hai yahaan bhi...
khwaaish hai itni, tumhe baahon mein bhar loo
meelo duur ho tum, kaash paas hote aap zaraa...
na bhool payi tumhe ek pal, ek lamha meri jaan
pukaar lo, daudi chali aaoongi chod saara jahaan...
aapki uss hasi ko betaabi se dhundhti hai nazren
binti hai aapse, ab toh muskura do mere liye...

17 Comments:

Blogger Vikas said...

I am so tempted to ask yet another question... but i will keep guessing ;)

pukaar lo, daudi chali aaoongi chod saara jahaan...
you will need some good running shoes :P

seriously, nice lines, little too philme for me but nice..

3:39 AM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger Ameen Budhwani said...

Ok Sal!!! Now I am also guessing :)
But ofcourse another good one

5:24 AM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger SumEDh said...

*ahem ahem*
btw, u forgot a "Read leave" somewhere. ;)

and I am bak to square one... cant understand, kiske liye hain ye. no point in asking u, as u will say "it's for me to know and you to guess"

6:01 AM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger green-eyed goblin said...

hey gurl...are you in love...i mean you could give javed and gulzar a run for their money......u rock gurl....keep it up!

6:35 AM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Vikas: If u knew why I was writing them, then it wudn't sound flimi

@ameen: Dont u guess ;) Thanx :)

@Sumedh: I thot meenakshi put "read leave" here. Was so sure someone wud atleast :) Rest u know wat I'd say ;)

@green eyed goblin: Thanx :) Javed & Gulzar r my fav writers, by far even close to them... so dont compare :P

9:01 AM, March 23, 2006  
Anonymous Mom said...

Muskurati hoon sirf,
Tumhe muskurate dekh,
Yunhi muskurate rahna,
Meri muskan ke liye.

9:05 AM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger Vikas said...


Muskurati hoon sirf,
...

beautiful!

definitely not filmi anymore!!
and I see where the talent comes from :)

9:15 AM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Vikas: All I wud say is, its good to think out of the box ;)

Yes, the talent is surely inherited

12:11 PM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Mom: That was beautiful... wwaah waah!!! Maashaa-allah! Hai rabba... mein mar jaava, Laleti jaan ;) Muaaahhh...!

12:36 PM, March 23, 2006  
Anonymous ss said...

that was beautiful !!

6:53 PM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger Vivek said...

nice ! .. yeh to ulti kahavat ho gayi .. ( aunty, pardon me if u r reading this ).. "beti ser to mom sava ser"

7:44 PM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger sumit said...

muskura rahe to hai ham
lekin hai bas yeah gum
door hai aap itne
lekin fir bhi hai dil ke karib kitne

9:53 PM, March 23, 2006  
Blogger Siddharth Adelkar said...

arre yeh kya hai.. saloni, i had seen you as a lil girl. now, youve grown up to become a fine lady who writes love poems about judai n all....keep it up.

1:44 AM, March 24, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@ss: Thanx :)

@vivek: yup, thats very true :)

@sumit: Hai rabba... mein mar jaava!

@ Siddharth Adelkar: Comments padhke bhi tujhe pata nahi chala ki yeh love poem nahi tha, tch tch tch...

8:07 AM, March 24, 2006  
Blogger MauLiN said...

Oye Sal!!!
Vaddi Changi Kavitayein Likhti hai yaar..
Apni Film mein tujhe hi Lyrics Writer Baanaongaa...
Good work yaar!!!
Keep it up!!!

7:23 PM, March 24, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Maulin: Thanx :) Lyricist zaroor banana teri film mein ;) Glad that u read my blog too

10:11 PM, March 24, 2006  
Blogger SAL said...

@Sumedh: Tere aur mere alaava, we seem to have one more SS here ;)

12:38 PM, March 26, 2006  

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